I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陈述自己的理由 3.提出至少2条建议。
范文： Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China 。 My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so 。
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored 。 There are many examples around us 。 Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected。 The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities 。 Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically 。
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
以约120个字对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论 1。 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法
2。 你的父母和亲人是如何鼓励孩子的 3。 你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习
From where I stand ， I am not in favor of encouraging kids with cash just because they have got good marks 。
My parents used to encourage me like this。 Whenever I made progress in studies ， they bought me my favorite books ，which not only motivated me to learn ，but also helped me get along well with my studies。
To get kids motivated to learn ， I think we should not treat every child in the same way。 To some students ， oral praise is essential 。 Don’t save the praise for only the top score。 If possible， involved other adults in praising them 。 However， this method may not work well with other kids。 Maybe what is more important to them is to water a movie or go on a trip together with their parents 。 It just depends。